05 现代生活篇 （一） 根据相关研究预测，如果缺乏有效干预措施，到 2025 年，中国将有 5000 万超重儿童，居世界首位。假如你是校园网的一名小记者，针对这一问题，请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。

提示：
1. 我国青少年肥胖问题日益严重；

2. 吃太多的高脂肪食品和不运动”是导致青 少年肥胖的主要原因；

3. 建议青少年健康饮食，多运动，养成良好的 生活习惯。

要求：
写作内容必须包含以上提示的所有内容，可以适当发挥；

80 词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词 数。

A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if any thing isn’t done._____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn＇t done. In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise. How should we solve the problem? Firstly, children must have healthy eating habits. They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food. Secondly, they should exercise often. It＇ll make them healthy and feel good. Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early. In a word, healthy eating, proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter. 【写作指导】 健康是与我们息息相关的话题，同学们可以选择自身作为切入点，详细讲述为自己制定的运动计划。

（二） 假如你是李华,给你在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件, 告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势, 并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护。要点如下: 1 我们的城市对于控制疫情已经取得较大的成功。

2注意防护，如减少外出，带口罩外出，勤洗手等。

3表达战胜疫情的信心。

注意: 1、可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯; 2、80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：novel coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】 Dear Jack, How is everything going? Novel coronavirus has spread throughout the world .Our city has achieved great success in controlling it. I have some advice for you on how to prevent it. The most important thing is to stay at home, try not to get together with your family and friends. Second, wash your hands often with soap and water. It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus. Third, when you have to go out, you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose, and learn how to put it on, take it off and throw it away correctly .Remember, if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital , and let a doctor give you further examination. All of these are helpful to keep you safe. We believe winter will finally pass, and spring is sure to come. We will go back to school as soon as possible. Hope everything goes well with you. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份，用第一人称给在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势，并告诉他一些防御措施，书写时要注意用全题干所给提示要点，文句通顺，内容完整。

2.例文点评：本例文层次分明，第一层讲述新型冠状病毒已经传遍全球，第二层讲述防范措施，第三层展望战胜疫情的信心；
短文陈述的中心突出，层次之间有机联系。

3.高分亮点：本篇例文运用的短语spread throughout the world；
achieve great success in；

have some advice for you on ；
keep you away from；
文中用不定式的不同句式The most important thing is to stay at home；
It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus；
try not to get together with your family and friends；
All of these are helpful to keep you safe；
多种复合句条件状语从句if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital ；
宾语从句We believe winter will finally pass, and spring is sure to come. 【点睛】 本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真阅读题干，了解题干的要求，确定中心话题，依据题干要求，分好短文的层次，确定层次的内容，使短文看起来逻辑清晰；
建议使用表顺序的副词或短语表达有关防御措施，使短文更有条理。

（三） 假如你是阳光中学的李华，即将要毕业的你，对学习和生活了三年的母校充满了眷恋和感恩，想在当地报刊上发表一篇英语文章描述自己的母校。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文。

学校 ①优美的学习环境。

②现代化的操场。

同学 ①相互学习，相互帮助。

②积极参加课外活动，提高能力。

老师 ①对我们的一切要求严格。

②......(自拟一点） 感想 ......(自拟两点） 要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。

2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。“……”部分需自拟。

3. 词数90个左右。

My Mother School I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years. It’s a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study. There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there. Besides that, we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life. We take an active part in after-school activities and it improves our abilities. The teachers are strict with us, but they are patient enough to explain everything to us. When something worries me, I often ask my teacher for help. I’m proud I can study in this school, and I’ll remember my mother school forever. 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇该材料作文，写一写自己对三年来母校的感想。本题所给材料较为详细。写作中注意从学校，老师和同学们三个方面进行叙述，并表达自己的感想。根据材料内容可知本文时态人称问题比较复杂，注意时态与时间状语的搭配，注意主谓一致问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；
语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文 点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

（四） 根据文字提示,请你以“ How to Keep Safe in School”为话题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文,谈谈你的看法 要点:1.描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件(经过与结果 2.提出避免这种校园意外的建议(至少两条); 3.呼吁同学们注意校园安全 要求:1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名;2.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数 提示词汇: not run in the hall ways, stop… from doing, pay attention to How to Keep Safe in School Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example_____ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 How to Keep Safe in School Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for several days. So I think students should walk and do not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school. 【解析】 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文。主要写三个方面的内容：描述一件发生在校园里的意外事件，要写明经过和结果，用一般过去时态；
提出至少两条避免意外发生的建议，用一般现在时；
最后要呼吁同学们注意校园安全。同时要注意提示词汇的使用。

例文点评：这篇短文内容清晰完整语言简洁正确。首先举例描述发生在校园里的意外事件，有过程有结果，接着用I think引入自己的建议，最后用I hope+从句的方式呼吁学生们要注意校园安全。

高分亮点：短语：ran after each other ；
because of；
fell down；
keep one eye on；
stop them from running；
pay attention to。

句型：had better do sth最好做某事；
I hope +从句。

（五） 昨天你班召开了一次“告别陋习，走上文明”的主题班会。会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请你根据表格里的内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。

过去的表现 现在的表现 经常和同学打架(fight) 和同学相处融洽( be good with) 花很多时间玩电脑游戏(spend time doing) 积极 (active)参加各项活动 (activity) 经常吃垃圾食品( junk food) 健康的生活习惯( living habits) 在课堂上吃东西，睡觉(either...or...) 认真听课，按时完成(finish)作业 考试不及格(fail) 各门学科取得好成绩，尤其 ( especially)数学 注意:1文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥使短文的意思连贯语句通顺。

2不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。字数80左右，(文章的开头已给出，不计入总字数) Wang Ming is my classmate. He had made great progress this term. In the past, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Wang Ming is my classmate. He had made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend much time playing computer games. And he often ate junk food. In class he either ate or slept. He always failed the exam. But now he changed a lot. He can be good with other students. He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and becomes very outgoing .He has healthy eating habits. Also he listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. So he gets good grades in all subjects, especially math. Now we all like him. 【解析】 题干解读：本文属于材料作文，根据你班召的主题班会“告别陋习，走上文明”的主题班会。谈谈你身边同学的变化。这篇文中涉及到了过去和现在的不同变化。文中需要用到一般过去时和一般现在时态。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务。本文是两段式，第一段介绍了过去的情况，第二段是现在的变化。语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3.高分亮点：
短语：make great progress；
in the past；
fight with；
either …or…；
take an active part in；
healthy eating habits。

句型：He used to spend much time playing computer games（used to do 的句型）；
He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and becomes very outgoing （六） 初三学生Sandy面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。

提示：
1．如何舒缓目前的压力；

2．如何安排好每天的学习和休息；

3．如何处理与父母的关系。

注意：
1．必须包括要点中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；

2．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

3．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

4．词数不少于90词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Sandy， I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．_____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Nancy 【满分范文】 Dear Sandy， I’m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me． Here is my advice．（点题） First， it’s a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure．【高分句型一】Second， you can make plans for your everyday life． After you study for about two hours， you can take a walk outside and try to relax． Besides， don’t stay up late． It’s not good for your health．Third， never argue with your parents． You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them． Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas． They will help you find better ways to solve them．（建议） In a word， you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents．【高分句型二】（总结全文） Yours， Nancy （七） 九年级的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦．请根据下面提示，以“Our School Life in Grade Nine为题写一篇词数为80左右的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议． 提示：
1． 在学校：老师认真负责，充满爱心；
学生：……（至少发挥两点） 2． 周末作业：作业多，舍弃爱好；
周末活动：锻炼、电视 愿望：……（发挥一到两点） 要求：1． 短文须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥；

2． 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

3． 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）． 参考词汇：patient， carefully， actively， stressed紧张的 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Our School Life in Grade Nine It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student．【高分句型一】 Here is what our school life is like now．（点题） At school, all of our teachers work very hard．Most of them are kind﹣hearted and patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems．As for students， in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively． After class，we are busy doing our homework． We all work hard to improve ourselves． On weekends, we spend much time doing homework， so we can’t spare time for our hobbies any more．I feel a little stressed，so I try to play basketball or watch TV to get relaxed．I hope to work hard to make my dream come true． I also wish my classmates healthy and happy every day．（介绍学校生活） No pains， no gains．The more carefully we plan our day， the more colorful our school life will be．【高分句型二】（总结全文） （八） 近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果．请以“My opinions about school bullying为题“，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法． 提示：
1．What do you think of school bullying？ 2．What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied？ 要求：
1．所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2.80 词以上． 参考词汇：心理问题 mental health problems． My opinions about school bullying __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ 【满分范文】 My opinions about school bullying School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society． Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset． Some students are afraid of going to school． School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems． So how should we stop school bullying？（我对校园欺凌的看法） If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied， I will tell the teachers or my parents at once．【高分句型一】 It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own．【高分句型二】（如果被欺负，我会怎么做） （九） 初中生活即将结束，这三年一定给你留下很多美好的回忆．英语俱乐部征文要求写篇110词左右文章描述你难忘的校园生活、师生情或同学情．以及在临别之际，对他们说的感激和祝福的话．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名． 【满分范文】 How time flies!Our junior high school days are coming to an end ，and I＇d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me．【高分句型一】（点题） Firstly，I＇d like to thank my great teachers．They teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a man．Though they look strict and serious，they are always kind to me．（感谢老师） Secondly，I want to thank my friendly classmates．As long as I have trouble，they are always around me．I miss the happy days when we stay with each other．I love all of you．（感谢同学） Finally，I＇m going to thank my parents．They always look after me very well to keep me healthy．And they often encourage me to work hard at school．【高分句型二】（感谢父母） （十） 亲爱的同学，假如你是 Alex， 初中生活即将结束，你所向往的高中生活即将来临．由于疫情（epidemic situation） 原因，你将代表（represent） 初三毕业生，做一个网络直播演讲． 请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿． （1）对初中三年学习生活的总结（至少三个方面） （2）对老师、同学及父母的感谢，并简要说明原因 （3）谈谈你对未来的梦想和肩负的社会责任，以及你得如何去实现 要求：1．文章语句通顺，句式多样．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校和班级． 4．词数：100词左右． Dear ladies and gentlemen， That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention! 【满分范文】 Dear ladies and gentlemen， It＇s my honor to make a speech at the graduating ceremony．【高分句型一】（点题） It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．【高分句型二】 We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．（对初中三年学习生活的总结） We should thank our teachers，our parents and our classmates．The first group is my classmates．We＇ve worked hard together and we＇ve even shared some difficult times together．The second group is our parents．I thank you for making a home where I feel both safe and relaxed．I also thank you for your help with my homework．The third group is our teachers．We can never pay you back for your kindness，your patience，and gift of knowledge which you have offered us．（对老师、同学、父母的感谢以及原因） In the future， I want to be a teacher to help more people in need．I will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible．（未来梦想以及如何实现） That＇s all for my speech． Thank you for your attention! （十一） “你养我长大，我陪你变老．“父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱．今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会．请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文． 要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；

（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；

（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；

（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）． 注意事项：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息． You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. __ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人） Dad and mum，today I＇ll cook dinner for you．I＇ll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）I hope you will be happy and healthy forever! 【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我． when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事， 【高分句型二】 It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人． 本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who … （十二） 初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想 (请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。

提示词语：three years；
memories；
one of；
one day；
think；
happy / sorry ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years＇ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn＇t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I＇ve become interested in English and I＇m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I＇ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others. （十三） 假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to；
mother＇s love；
care about；
communicate with；
get along with；
smile 写作要求：
语句通顺，书写工整；

可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；

词数在60-80左右。

Dear Han Mei, I＇m afraid I＇ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.““Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?“ And so on. I＇m annoyed (烦恼). What shall I do? Yours， Alice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Dear Alice, As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you. Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it＇s not a good way, but it shows your mother＇s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother＇s you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn＇t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile. I hope what I say here can help you a lot. Yours Han Mei